Ok, if you are reading this, and wondering where is the poem, YOU MISSED IT. Due to the length of the poem, and me, being kind of obsessed about keeping the blog neat, I have moved the poem to a new space. Check it out.
Not your best poetry, but then it sounds like your mind is overdosed on oxygen right now. Your concluding paragraphs are on correct. "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" (Phil. 4:13).
well, it is kind of hard to be creative, when you are overdosing on oxygen. It is also my first attempt at poetry in quite a few years. thanks for the comments tho.
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Not your best poetry, but then it sounds like your mind is overdosed on oxygen right now. Your concluding paragraphs are on correct. "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" (Phil. 4:13).
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well, it is kind of hard to be creative, when you are overdosing on oxygen. It is also my first attempt at poetry in quite a few years. thanks for the comments tho.
yeah that was good...it's definitely more creative than the last poem I wrote...
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